REVIEW
The story commences with the observation of a mother Sarika when she spots her daughter Ana in a tad subdued mood. When she tries to know the reason of her lowly comportment, Ana denies anything specific. But a mother is a mother and gets instantly what the matter was. To know further--read a wonderful story written by Samridhi Garg in Crush 2 published by Author's Ink Publication.
Merits:
The conversation between a mother and her daughter has been portrayed beautifully. Each sentence is meticulously crafted and each paragraph is supplemented by either a simile, a figure of speech or an adjective at appropriate places. Wonderful! The frank, truthful and friendly discussion between the two is an eye opener for conservative parents.
The sentence worth mentioning: "No. I never missed him after I met your dad and I never regretted. Your dad is such a gem. He helped me to move on and taught me how to fall in love again."
Demerits: The above sentence is self explanatory. On one side it shows the truthfulness of a mother's confession before her daughter about her feelings for her first love or crush, her selfishness is also expressed in a straight non-emotional manner for the person she liked once on the other.This could've been presented in another way showing some sympathetic attitude towards her teenage-crush.
Ratings 4.5/5
Wish her all the best for her forthcoming writings which I would like to read definitely.
Well done!
Rajeev Pundir
The story commences with the observation of a mother Sarika when she spots her daughter Ana in a tad subdued mood. When she tries to know the reason of her lowly comportment, Ana denies anything specific. But a mother is a mother and gets instantly what the matter was. To know further--read a wonderful story written by Samridhi Garg in Crush 2 published by Author's Ink Publication.
Merits:
The conversation between a mother and her daughter has been portrayed beautifully. Each sentence is meticulously crafted and each paragraph is supplemented by either a simile, a figure of speech or an adjective at appropriate places. Wonderful! The frank, truthful and friendly discussion between the two is an eye opener for conservative parents.
The sentence worth mentioning: "No. I never missed him after I met your dad and I never regretted. Your dad is such a gem. He helped me to move on and taught me how to fall in love again."
Demerits: The above sentence is self explanatory. On one side it shows the truthfulness of a mother's confession before her daughter about her feelings for her first love or crush, her selfishness is also expressed in a straight non-emotional manner for the person she liked once on the other.This could've been presented in another way showing some sympathetic attitude towards her teenage-crush.
Wish her all the best for her forthcoming writings which I would like to read definitely.
Well done!
Rajeev Pundir
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