REVIEW
She entered the class with heavenly smile and dimples on her soft rosy cheeks.
These compelling lines tells the story of a boy, as young as a seventh-class student, who instantly falls for the girl, a new admission in his class. What happens next, read the story School Crush in Crush 2 by C K.
Merits:
The way the story has been narrated is so natural and flows into the pages so silently with intermittent intoxicating humming melody, that the reader is lost into it sheerly, as if it's his/her own story. Actually, such a crush happens with all of us--either agree or disagree and I give full marks to CK for penning it so beautifully, specially the boy's waiting outside her house to have a glimpse of his crush Priya.
Lines caught my heart:
"Her handwriting was something like a masterpiece or you can say her pen was a butterfly which spread the colors in her notebook."
Fantastic!
Demerits:
The title of this story is grammatically confusing. To make it clear, it should have been, "School-time Crush". Nothing more except a few typos.
Ratings: 4/5
The writer has a great potential of becoming a compelling writer. I look forward for more interesting stories from his heart spilling over the pages through his pen. All the best!
Rajeev Pundir
She entered the class with heavenly smile and dimples on her soft rosy cheeks.
These compelling lines tells the story of a boy, as young as a seventh-class student, who instantly falls for the girl, a new admission in his class. What happens next, read the story School Crush in Crush 2 by C K.
Merits:
The way the story has been narrated is so natural and flows into the pages so silently with intermittent intoxicating humming melody, that the reader is lost into it sheerly, as if it's his/her own story. Actually, such a crush happens with all of us--either agree or disagree and I give full marks to CK for penning it so beautifully, specially the boy's waiting outside her house to have a glimpse of his crush Priya.
Lines caught my heart:
"Her handwriting was something like a masterpiece or you can say her pen was a butterfly which spread the colors in her notebook."
Fantastic!
Demerits:
The title of this story is grammatically confusing. To make it clear, it should have been, "School-time Crush". Nothing more except a few typos.
The writer has a great potential of becoming a compelling writer. I look forward for more interesting stories from his heart spilling over the pages through his pen. All the best!
Rajeev Pundir
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