REVIEW:
This story is about the innocent love of a girl for a boy who's not as perfect as we find in other stories. The girl develops soft feelings for that boy when he's admitted to her school in her class. And the story compels you to read further to know the future of this childhood crush.
Merits:
People are known to fall for the most beautiful, deserving, successful, intelligent and extra-ordinary human beings. That's natural. But here's a story, straight from the innocence of childhood, so different and so pure at heart that you start loving the writer for writing such a wonderful story where an innocent girl, as young as in seventh grade, develops tender feelings for a boy who's very good at heart but imperfect. Seldom we see such stories. Bold and brave attempt by the writer and I congratulate her for the same.
Lines I liked: "I was on the verge of crying. Ominous clouds have gathered and tears were lurking nearby. I could sense it"
Demerits: The balance of narration and conversation is to be looked upon. Nothing much.
Ratings: 4/5
The brief bio of the writer discloses her to be multi-talented. I wish good luck for her waiting for more from her creative mind.
Rajeev Pundir
This story is about the innocent love of a girl for a boy who's not as perfect as we find in other stories. The girl develops soft feelings for that boy when he's admitted to her school in her class. And the story compels you to read further to know the future of this childhood crush.
Merits:
People are known to fall for the most beautiful, deserving, successful, intelligent and extra-ordinary human beings. That's natural. But here's a story, straight from the innocence of childhood, so different and so pure at heart that you start loving the writer for writing such a wonderful story where an innocent girl, as young as in seventh grade, develops tender feelings for a boy who's very good at heart but imperfect. Seldom we see such stories. Bold and brave attempt by the writer and I congratulate her for the same.
Lines I liked: "I was on the verge of crying. Ominous clouds have gathered and tears were lurking nearby. I could sense it"
Demerits: The balance of narration and conversation is to be looked upon. Nothing much.
Ratings: 4/5
The brief bio of the writer discloses her to be multi-talented. I wish good luck for her waiting for more from her creative mind.
Rajeev Pundir
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